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I flirted with disaster.
She gave me her number, and a look that said
“Write this down.”
Caught up in a
Whirlwind romance
In a quake that shook the stars
from the sky
(like apples, torn from
someone else’s tree)
and buried them
in her hair.
Caught in the throes
Of some ultraviolet catastrophe.
That beautiful girl
Chainsmoking dreams.
I managed
Small triumphs.
She let me console her.
Once or twice.
I held her
close enough to hear her
hot breath. And feel her
Gasp. Chest to chest as my hand
slid down her back.
We hid behind
stolen thunder
and borrowed clouds from
back-alley dealers of mist and illusion.
One kiss. Filled with silent light
and three encounters
in darkened hours
of quiet days.
And the danger in her eyes
when she knew
all i wanted was to shatter
her addiction
smash her storms to cloudshapes
and harmless smithereens
to tear her pain away, so hard
It broke us both.
Because I cared for her
more than she could handle
and loved her
more than she could take.
So she gave me her cigarette
And whispered
“hold this instead”
and I did.
She gave me her number, and a look that said
“Write this down.”
Caught up in a
Whirlwind romance
In a quake that shook the stars
from the sky
(like apples, torn from
someone else’s tree)
and buried them
in her hair.
Caught in the throes
Of some ultraviolet catastrophe.
That beautiful girl
Chainsmoking dreams.
I managed
Small triumphs.
She let me console her.
Once or twice.
I held her
close enough to hear her
hot breath. And feel her
Gasp. Chest to chest as my hand
slid down her back.
We hid behind
stolen thunder
and borrowed clouds from
back-alley dealers of mist and illusion.
One kiss. Filled with silent light
and three encounters
in darkened hours
of quiet days.
And the danger in her eyes
when she knew
all i wanted was to shatter
her addiction
smash her storms to cloudshapes
and harmless smithereens
to tear her pain away, so hard
It broke us both.
Because I cared for her
more than she could handle
and loved her
more than she could take.
So she gave me her cigarette
And whispered
“hold this instead”
and I did.
Literature
ash
I used to
write poetry
but when
the flame
of wanting
you
finally
burned
out
I found
I had nothing
left
to say
Literature
A word about haiku - MS James
A word about haiku - by Michael James
I believe there are a few basic precepts about haiku that are largely overlooked, or just flat out just not taught in most basic literary (poetic) courses. Everyone seems to know that a haiku is supposed to be written in the structure of 5-7-5 syllables per line respectively, but there is much more going on than just a simple syllable constraint. I shall attempt to give a brief overview of the main points about haiku.
First off, the 5-7-5 syllable structure most often cited as being the sole 'structural rule' of haiku is based on the original Japanese constraint. However, the Japanese language and more
Literature
ash
the first time i looked into your eyes
was one year after meeting you.
my toes barely dipped into the pond
of blue before i realized there wasn't
much to swim to.
i fooled myself long ago into thinking that
if i was ever brave enough, i could plunge
into your endless depths and bathe in purity.
soak up your little-boy grins and weave laughter
with you, creating the most infinite soundtrack.
but when our irises finally connected,
i felt the make-believe ropes i had looped
through your fingers snap like convictions
too heavy to maintain.
it was the first time in a while
that i had a name for the reason
i was broken.
i shook in a rhythm
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ur descriptions are out of this world...
will you please write a short story or one-shot?
*cutest puppy face known to man*
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will you please write a short story or one-shot?
*cutest puppy face known to man*
:]